Shipwrecked progress report 31.12.2023

Well, I sat down with the draft script and the draft album. It was mostly strong. - So, restructuring the ferry scene to include all of Pan's Preludes... I and II remain the same as they currently are. III is the students and the militia fighting in their dinghys (part 1), IV is the journalists and the rising tension and the politicians in the Beehive. V is the students and militia (part 2). VI. Something Just Broke [a song from Assassins]. A bunch of grabs of scenes of daily life as the news breaks about the hundreds of people killed on the ferry. Radio, TV, Internet; people of all walks of life. Timed to dialogue - ballet-esque.