Amanda's Sunday in the Park - lyric revisions
- Amanda Riddell
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- 1 day ago
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First up, I'm fixing Lapine's dialogue to be practical. In Colour and Light, it's not Dot saying 'the follies, george!' It's 'the follies, George. We're going!' Dot should speak vernacular English of the old theatre world when practical. - Move On: 'Let others make that decision: they typically do.' 'Anything you do; let it come from you; give me more to see.'
Typically isn't on the discarded list in the book. Some people have an idea that is so good that they redefine the world. Others don't make that decision: that's how you win a Nobel. Give me more to see is a no-brainer. Fuck the audience: it's a psycho-drama! She's the collective memory come to haunt him.